A good start
This isn't a bad movie, althought the graphics aren't fantastic, you obviously have some Flash skills and have used them well. The speech was clear enough to be understandable and you attempted some lip movement to make it more convincing. The movment was however better on the guy with the moustache. There were some nice sound effects in there as well. As for the file size, less than 250kb, that's fantastic considering all the sound effects and speech it contained. A well optimised Flash, what I like to see. It was pleasing to see an attempt at some backgrounds aswell, instead of the usual boring white backgrounds that beginners use. I was impressed with the preloader, it was good to have a loading bar and a percentage. With a better storyline and some more memorable characters, with unique voices, you've got potential for a half decent series here. Good luck for more.