Not the best in the series
I get it now the whole series has the same intro but a different death, nice original idea. This wasn't as good as the second movie but it was still small in size and definetly worth watching. Once again nice sounds and animation.
This was the same opening as the second with a different ending, nice idea. I liked the sound effects too, where did you get them from?
This wasn't bad but it lacked something. It would have been nice to have seen the inclusion of a more detailed background and possibly some more interesting sound effects. It did have some storyline, but if there had been a proper ending it would have been much improved. Also it shouldn't have gone back to the first frame at the end, perhaps you should have included a credits page with a replay button. Anway lovely animation that I'd like to see more of.
Short but Sweet
Although there wasn't auctually much there it was worth watching, especially conisdering it loaded in a instant. The animation of the stick was smooth and the car blowing up came as a bit of a surprise to me, however there wasn't enought there for it to be a great movie. Perhaps you could take this idea and build on it, perhaps include a little more storyline than, a stick getting into a car and getting blown up. Nice work though.
A good start
This isn't a bad movie, althought the graphics aren't fantastic, you obviously have some Flash skills and have used them well. The speech was clear enough to be understandable and you attempted some lip movement to make it more convincing. The movment was however better on the guy with the moustache. There were some nice sound effects in there as well. As for the file size, less than 250kb, that's fantastic considering all the sound effects and speech it contained. A well optimised Flash, what I like to see. It was pleasing to see an attempt at some backgrounds aswell, instead of the usual boring white backgrounds that beginners use. I was impressed with the preloader, it was good to have a loading bar and a percentage. With a better storyline and some more memorable characters, with unique voices, you've got potential for a half decent series here. Good luck for more.
Fair enough that you're not able to make a preloader and what you had was nice. But on the main portal page, under the submit button there is a link to download the Newgrounds.com preloader. This consists of a picture of the tank and a bar that shows how much is loaded. As for the movie, it was nicely done, it needed some sound effects, but they were simple and a little repetitive, it would have been better if they'd been differend and more varied. Overall though a good job and I'll keep my eye out for more of your work. Just one question though why that name, what had it to do with Metal Gear?
Not too bad
Although I'm not a fan of trailers, this wasn't that bad, it animation in it and some effort has clearly gone into it's creation. I'll keep an eye out for the full movie.
That was brilliant
The preloader was nice, but it would have been better if a play button had appeared at the end, instead of it going straight into it. The sound effects were perfectly in time with the animation, which was amazing. Without the sound effects it would have been a little dull, so nice choice. Although there was no proper storyline to it, it was nice to see all that animation, brought to a close so nicely at the end.
Great For The File Size
That was absolutely fabulous, especially as it was only 170kb. The punches appeared to connect and the grenade being thrown back and forth and the stick with the gun added something different to it, instead of it wearing thin. The sounds were a nice addition too, where did you get them from?
That Was Amazing
The intro, with the writing getting hit by a football looked cool. The way the player ran and tapped the ball ahead looked good and the crowd were amazing, there were so many different expressions on their faces. The music also fitted in well. The best bit was the keeper diving through the air trying to stop the ball and they way it flashed to the player's face and the keeper's hand. Once it was over I loved how The morphed into End. The only thing I can say that wasn't perfect was the preloader, the Newgrounds loaded bar didn't move at all, but atleast the play button appeared. Perhaps you could try to fix it and update this submission. Nice work, I'm off to watch your other movies.
thanx for letting me know about the preloader...i didnt notice that..i'll try to fix it soon...and i am glad u liked it..i'll try to make the second episode even better..
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