Score: 7

"Room For Improvement"

submission: H Tank

date: March 22, 2003

This is an alright game, but there's definetly room for improvement. For a start the car needs to be a lot less reactive to steering as at the monent it's quite hard to drive. It would be really neat if you included a speedometer, either as a dial, a bar or a number. As you mentioned getting out of the car would be really neat.

Score: 7

"Not the best in the series"

submission: AnotherShort Animation 4

date: March 12, 2003

I get it now the whole series has the same intro but a different death, nice original idea. This wasn't as good as the second movie but it was still small in size and definetly worth watching. Once again nice sounds and animation.

Score: 7

"Nice Work"

submission: AnotherShort Animation 3

date: March 12, 2003

This was the same opening as the second with a different ending, nice idea. I liked the sound effects too, where did you get them from?

Score: 7

"Pretty Good"

submission: Quick Fight!

date: March 12, 2003

This wasn't bad but it lacked something. It would have been nice to have seen the inclusion of a more detailed background and possibly some more interesting sound effects. It did have some storyline, but if there had been a proper ending it would have been much improved. Also it shouldn't have gone back to the first frame at the end, perhaps you should have included a credits page with a replay button. Anway lovely animation that I'd like to see more of.

Score: 7

"Short but Sweet"

submission: Another Short Animation 2

date: March 12, 2003

Although there wasn't auctually much there it was worth watching, especially conisdering it loaded in a instant. The animation of the stick was smooth and the car blowing up came as a bit of a surprise to me, however there wasn't enought there for it to be a great movie. Perhaps you could take this idea and build on it, perhaps include a little more storyline than, a stick getting into a car and getting blown up. Nice work though.

Score: 7

"Good for the size"

submission: Target Practice v.1.0

date: March 12, 2003

I know this has been done before, but it was well done and quite fun to play. I found it really hard to hit them in time and found that the target seemed to lag a little when moving the mouse quickly. It would have been nice to see some better animations and perhaps upgradeable weapons, but overall it was a nice game considering the size.

Score: 8

"A good start"

submission: Heroman Episode 1

date: March 11, 2003

This isn't a bad movie, althought the graphics aren't fantastic, you obviously have some Flash skills and have used them well. The speech was clear enough to be understandable and you attempted some lip movement to make it more convincing. The movment was however better on the guy with the moustache. There were some nice sound effects in there as well. As for the file size, less than 250kb, that's fantastic considering all the sound effects and speech it contained. A well optimised Flash, what I like to see. It was pleasing to see an attempt at some backgrounds aswell, instead of the usual boring white backgrounds that beginners use. I was impressed with the preloader, it was good to have a loading bar and a percentage. With a better storyline and some more memorable characters, with unique voices, you've got potential for a half decent series here. Good luck for more.

Score: 8

"Nice work"

submission: Metal Gear Square: Ep1.

date: March 9, 2003

Fair enough that you're not able to make a preloader and what you had was nice. But on the main portal page, under the submit button there is a link to download the Newgrounds.com preloader. This consists of a picture of the tank and a bar that shows how much is loaded. As for the movie, it was nicely done, it needed some sound effects, but they were simple and a little repetitive, it would have been better if they'd been differend and more varied. Overall though a good job and I'll keep my eye out for more of your work. Just one question though why that name, what had it to do with Metal Gear?

Score: 7

"Not too bad"

submission: The Bounty (Trailer)

date: February 26, 2003

Although I'm not a fan of trailers, this wasn't that bad, it animation in it and some effort has clearly gone into it's creation. I'll keep an eye out for the full movie.

Score: 10

"That was brilliant"

submission: I Love Egg ep.1

date: February 26, 2003

The preloader was nice, but it would have been better if a play button had appeared at the end, instead of it going straight into it. The sound effects were perfectly in time with the animation, which was amazing. Without the sound effects it would have been a little dull, so nice choice. Although there was no proper storyline to it, it was nice to see all that animation, brought to a close so nicely at the end.